11+ Creative Writing Service
11+ Descriptive Writing Pack
Descriptive tasks reward precision, not volume. This pack teaches restraint and specificity. Every pack is self-contained: task sheets, planning frameworks, exemplar responses and an optional marking add-on so a tutor reads the final piece and returns a banded report.
Course outline
Session 01
What examiners want from descriptive writing
Sensory detail, precise nouns and controlled figurative language instead of stacked adjectives.
Session 02
Model responses
Two exemplar descriptive writing pieces, one a solid pass and one top band, annotated so the difference is visible.
Session 03
Guided practice tasks
Four graded descriptive writing tasks with planning frameworks pupils can reuse in the exam room.
Session 04
Timed task and marking
A final task written to exam timing, returned with line-by-line marking and a banded score.
By the end
- Confidence with descriptive writing under exam timing
- A reusable planning framework for this question type
- Exemplars showing what a top-band answer looks like
- Marked feedback on the final timed task