11+ Creative Writing Service
11+ Diary Entry Pack
Diary questions look easy and lose marks quietly. This pack fixes voice, tense and reflection. Every pack is self-contained: task sheets, planning frameworks, exemplar responses and an optional marking add-on so a tutor reads the final piece and returns a banded report.

Course outline
Session 01
What examiners want from diary entries
Diary tasks are marked on voice, tense and reflection.
Session 02
Model responses
Two exemplar diary entries pieces, one a solid pass and one top band, annotated so the difference is visible.
Session 03
Guided practice tasks
Four graded diary entries tasks with planning frameworks pupils can reuse in the exam room.
Session 04
Timed task and marking
A final task written to exam timing, returned with line-by-line marking and a banded score.
By the end
- Confidence with diary entries under exam timing
- A reusable planning framework for this question type
- Exemplars showing what a top-band answer looks like
- Marked feedback on the final timed task